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June 1, 2025 at 8:39 pm #587502
For those who read ABF or ANr stories. What plot lines make up a good ANR ABF story? Does it matter why lactation is taking place
couple or woman induces, woman is pregnant or has given birth. Story should be about dry nursing.
Type of relationship ABF a one off or something casual. ANR, a long term committed relationship with nursing at the centre.
Age of characters
Young adult, early 20s through late 30s, middle aged 40s through mid 60s, or older 65 plus.
How many characters?
Just the characters involved with nursing, some miner characters to round out the story.
How much drama?
None, make it all about the nursing, some pushback from friends, family, miner characters.
Should the story be sexual or nonsexual.
Slow burn or not.
Take time to develop the characters and their backstory, or get right to nursing.
Does anyone else write stories about adult nursing? What has worked in terms of getting exposure.June 1, 2025 at 10:54 pm #587561Don’t forget to include Seal Team 6. 😜
June 2, 2025 at 1:07 am #587635I won’t, I’ll throw the A team in for good measure. LOL
June 2, 2025 at 5:08 am #587704Lol, are you writing a story? A book, or something for here to read?
I have no advice for you what would make a good story, but you can come up with different type of stories and scenarios.
I personally hate drama, but you don’t need drama, but you can make things thrilling though some side story maybe. Keep it suspense. Lol
Have fun writing!
June 2, 2025 at 5:23 am #587706I would think that short stories would get More reads versus something longer like a book. Mostly looking to submit stories here.
June 2, 2025 at 6:00 am #587723Have fun writing! Short stories are definitely fun to read!
June 2, 2025 at 7:47 am #587758I think the truth adds a certain amount of weight to a story. I’ve never been someone that liked the “over the top” fantasy style stories.
Sometimes real life, is crazier than fiction.
Just my 2 cents.Happy writing! ☺️
June 2, 2025 at 2:38 pm #587828The story needs to sound authentic, even if its pure fantasy.
Even if it’s a short story it shouldn’t chop and change too much from different points of view because it just gets cumbersome and hard to follow.
This is going to sound like I’m the grammar police now, but sentence structure, paragraphs and good punctuation make stories easier for the reader. You could be writing the most amazing story ever, but if it’s hard to read, people won’t get to the end of it and that would be a real shame!
June 4, 2025 at 7:48 pm #588965I’d like to try my hand at writing a short story one of these days. I used to write a lot back in the day, and contributing to the community would be a good incentive to get back behind the keyboard, as well as make myself known as a newbie here.
Is there somewhere where I can post or submit a story?
June 5, 2025 at 5:03 am #589248As far as I know the general forum is where you can post stories. As long as they’re your original work. Michael_ Admin would be able to say for sure. All the best in your writing. though. the admin
June 5, 2025 at 8:34 am #589295I think your story should be clear, whether it’s going to be calming and nurturing, or hot and sexy and fast or both.
Some of the best stories I have heard are true stories especially of how 2 people inadvertently find nursing a comfort and how they make it a regular lifestyle and reach lactation and explore it further. Like all good relationships it’s about 2-way giving and taking and communicating needs and preferences.
Each of these steps is multilayered and can be a small book because the emotions and the journey in each phase of the man/woman are unique. Emotions are what resonate and keep one reading because we humans like to mirror the emotions of the other.
In terms of my journey, I have been able to explore and connect to a higher energy and love by nurturing these feelings. It does veer into other areas sometimes because we humans aren’t always selfless but I can control it without feeling any frustration because I understand the root cause of it and understand that life is a journey that is sometimes an exploration and is taken by oneself.
Best of luck 🤞
June 5, 2025 at 4:35 pm #589461Thanks kindly, guys!
As I’ve never been breastfed as an adult, true stories and personal experiences are out of the question, and the specifics of the intimacy involved in nursing will be estimates as best. 😂
Still, I’m willing to give it my best shot. I’ll read the already published stories to get an idea what’s popular or enjoyed, and I might even ask some of the nursers here about their experience. I’m crossing my fingers that my first try turns out well. 😊
June 5, 2025 at 10:42 pm #589607Thanks Ms.Spicy! I definitely appreciate your suggestion of a multi layered approach. Kind of like a good sandwich multiple layers to provide multiple flavours and when it all comes together it creates something that no single layer could’ve produced on its own. Can you tell it’s close to supper. Lol
June 5, 2025 at 11:07 pm #589621Yes I hear you, I have the same problem loll
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